Research Paper

Where are you at in your research paper?
I've already gathered my sources and have confirmed that they are all accurate

What difficulties/fears/concerns you have as for the research paper assignment?
Might become too scientific and perhaps I might change my view on the topic from time to time

How are you thinking to solve them?
For decreasing complex information, I will try to summarise each information by excluding the scientific terms or if it's possible, explaining the scientific terms to the reader. For the latter problem, there's only one solution : concentrate!

Analysis Paper P2P (Peer-2-Peer) Review

We were to analyze each other's analysis paper and this blog post is about the aftermath of the review :)

What were the most unexpected comments you received/heard today?
"Where's your ad"

How did your group work together?
Really well. I was with Boram Kim, Brian Evakise,and Fahad Khan and we worked excellent together (I guess so!). Boram has an excellent sense of analysis and she brought out the points that I would think unnecessary and she also explained the points well. Now let's talk about Brian. That guy's hilarious. Yes, that's the only word that fits perfectly for his description. It was a little bit difficult for me to review Brian's paper as he didn't include the advertisement. But nevertheless, both Fahad and Brian had showed me their advertisements the previous week (yes, Fahad also didn't include the ad).

What will be the focus of your revision/editing after the peer review?
I need to focus on the layout more and should limit my use of fragmented sentences (actually, "you" mentioned it)