Peer Review

What is the most helpful feedback you received today?
The one that struck me the most was told by both Kayla and Hlao. It was simple but important : take a side, as the research paper should be argumentative

Group work
We all got many common suggestions from each other which helped us to pinpoint our own errors. As usual, (and as expected) everyone in the group was nice and really helpful (including me :D).

Focus of Revision
As English is my second language, I need to consider revising my grammar and as well as be argumentative for my topic. Also, I need to fix my way of citing sources as I didn't follow the APA guidelines correctly.